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Flying to the moon,
It could never come too soon.

Feeling the urge to fly,
Whenever I look into your eyes.

Heart beat like a hummingbird,
Telling myself it's absurd.

Smiling all through the day,
When ever you have been my way.

Fluttering in my chest,
Joy in every breath.

Flower bloomed in the heat,
The taste of which is sweet.

So beautiful and small,
Feeling of being so tall.

Hidden from the world,
That you sent me in a swirl.

Everyday is torture,
For how you feel is unsure.

One thing I know is I will never learn,
But does your heart beat for me like a hummingbirds?
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This is quite short for me, but I was getting impatient and didn't know what else to write in this. There's a lot of references to a hummingbird in this poem (obviously), I wanted to try something a little different i.e. basing an entire poem around an animal to represent certain feelings...

Anyway, hope you like it.
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Mood: Love ~BruceLugli May 20, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Beatiful
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Mood: Joy ~Liddee May 21, 2012  Student General Artist
:D thank you! :)
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Mood: Wow! ~oilbigbrozer May 19, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
beauty full !!
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Mood: Joy ~Liddee May 19, 2012  Student General Artist
thank you! :D
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~SteffiNoodle Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very talented with your writing :meow: nice one!
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~Liddee Apr 30, 2012  Student General Artist
:D thanks youuuu :hug:
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~LadyKiriTheFallen Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really like the last line.
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Mood: Joy ~Liddee Apr 30, 2012  Student General Artist
thanks :) hopefully you like the rest too though,,, lol
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